Great!

at least the bottle was empty but it left a mark, it left a trace

I didn’t say a word I turned around and left

I took your bottle with me you can call it petty theft

I sat down in the garden and allowed myself to cry

Should I fight back? Should I even try?

I sat amongst the flowers the plants and pebbles too

Ran my hands around the rocks and I knew what I had to do

I filled my hand with pebbles and filled your bottle up

My tears turned to his smile dropping rocks down in your cup

I had the perfect plan after all you hit me first

I’ll throw that rocky bottle at you and pray it doesn’t burst

I walked back in the room bottle in my hand

Smelled your sickening perfume

And I did what I had planned

I didn’t hesitate

Hell I almost laughed

vengeful and vindictive revenge

my perfect craft.

Could someone tell me what type of poem this is?

Thank you, Kathy!

For bringing up the point about being pulled out of the book. In regard to grammar and misspelled words, unfortunately, that is not my best subject I have to go over my writing several times a day. for example, just in this paragraph I see several mistakes I need to go back and fix.

i understand not taking notes on the first read, I read books over and over sometimes. To always read through first time then go back and takes notes after the first read. Mainly for personal use. Readers may want to be immersed int the story, and to be taken out of reality.

Maybe i can be of help. Im a school paper adviser and an article writer at a national monthly magazine.

Beautiful, I’m working on a project for a client. First story narrative and of course, suddenly everything I think I know sounds not so reliable. So I decided to read around first before taking pen to paper. After reading this article, and your excerpt, my creative juices are flowing and I cannot contain the excitement. Thank you for this piece..

Mack Bolan. Don Pendleton’s character. By far the longest running series+ spinoffs ran until 2020. They published a book a month for decades.